Well, I suppose that I have already seen this complete, I was going to leave a comment here, but since the page went into maintenance it has never arrived, so I leave this here now.

The stickmans animation is very good animated, but it has lacked sound or a background music, just!!!

Gotta love the classic edgy stick movies

ehh its ok

needs sound! and thats it
sound and vioces would make this very good hope the next one will have them.

Looks great

Your timing and drawing abilities are both impecable. I really admire how good your stick characters look when they move. I also like how you give your audience enough time to read the sub-titles during the action sequences.

I'm curious to know why you did not include sound in this movie? Are you waiting till you find proper voice actors and background musics to fit perfectly with your ideas? Or did you just decide to keep everything silent? Either way, I am able to understand everything very clearly in this flashwork, without any music or sound effects.

Your story is both very engaging and written very well. I find that all your main characters are made distinct from one another, by their dialogue and physical features. That is a mark of a pretty good writer, and I commend your efforts on this story.

All I can suggest is that you fill in your audience on why Bu killed his father and why Ju had a reason to kill Bu before the father's murder. I say this because I find that you're not telling the audience everything they need to know, so they can understand the motiviation driving Ju and Bu to fight one another.

Overall I like where this is going and I look forwards to part B

Good...but..

Stop trying to be trendy. You can animate damned well, and you spend enough time on your stick figures to flesh them out, with all the shading and whatnot. Your so close, yet so far from the mark. Spend more time on the characters...flesh out your sticks frame by frame...you've proven you have enough talent to do so. Oh, and try to put a little originality in your plot...if your going to rip off akira, dont do it so obviously (wakes up in lab, sees test subject, lab is compromised of 80% corridors). Its cool and all, but when its not all yours, it's kind of sad...you have so much potential