Notbad

Alright so notbad here, this was pretty good the sprites were notbad the story was decent animation was ok but could be smoother, and you dont need that next dialog button, the movie itself has an ok story and was not too bad was bland at times, I liked it though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
animation was ok but could be smoother, thats about the onlything that could be cleaned up oh and remove the next dialog button its a hassle just clicking on it just allow this to flow like a movie.

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Very good!

What is that game? Or it isn't a game? You now are in my favorite artist!

That was awesome...

And the file size is so little. How the hell did you manage to do that? This was great, I can't wait to see the rest of the episodes. Very nice story line so far, and the characters are pretty cool.

Great!

Just curious,why do you have 2 part 1?

Awesome!

THE BEST!