Um?

Looks good....

It's too much like the book Eragon or Eldest for my liking.

~Trix

Go ahead

continue, but i think that your animation may not be all that good for some reason, so in the next episode work a little extra on animation before you submit.

Nice drawings

but there isnt really any animation.

I realize this is a preview, but it was boring. Most of it consisted of reading randomly placed text. I'm also not clear on the story line.

Still, this may turn out to be ok if your characters actually move in the first episode.

is this a preview?

Good preview ill watch the first episode when it comes...Should've made it longer though..

Ahhh.........

Well the fact is you don't give us anything to go on. Story line lacks a little the two characters are drawn well but thats all we really have to go one........ No infomation what so ever