yea

that was to short

could have been way better

you have a somewhat good idea, but it ended so quickly, i can see why nobody liked it. what you need to do is have the waddle dee army come after him or something, mabye he converts a few to his cause, starts a revolution. hang on, i actually call dibs on that

Good job

I liked it. I cant see why everyone's complaining...

your name is josh isn't it?

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this is a CRAP