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Some of you may remember me from making a short animation about a kid and two sticks (you'll se him in my webpagge), the animation was blammed almost imediatly because it did not have any plot, but the comments and feedback where usefull. Im doing the same now with this animation, I know it has no plot or anything, but I love to recieve feedback from you guys, although it would be nice this time if the animation could hang around the portal a bit longer. Im not asking for "Vote 5"... im just asking for you to keep it "unblammed" so i can recieve feedback, If it ain't possible, that's ok. I understand you guys want action packed stuff, but it'll come along soon enough, im just practicing with flash and animation techniques now. Thanx Again.


Rod F


PLEASE REVIEW! I WANT FEEDBACK AND COMMENTS RATHER THAN JUST PLAIN VOTES

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Not too good.

Sorry, I'am a little dissapointed. I watched your trailer to your new flash series and it was pretty good and than i watched this.

I noticed the graphics were good and the movie was well optimazed. good use of a 70k file size. But the movie just did'nt entertainment me at all.

Here's a bit of advice, Make the movie have pacing at the start,Some sound and just about anything that's entertaining. It takes more than looking pretty to make a good flash movie.

Anyway's Good luck on your future works.

Well...

It looks good, but you really need to turn it into something more. Right now it just looks really basic, and I think I'm being overly generous giving you the score I did. Make it longer, like into a short video (sort of as you stated in your intro), and it should be much better.

-- Kitty

It looks great.

Now turn it into a movie, and you've got gold.

I'm reviewing this for what it is

This isn't a movie, or a song, or an episode. It's just a test of his I believe. It's very nice looking, good job.

For what it is, a simple character design, it exceeded my expectations.

4/5

gfds

nice graphics, but I think people still want the plot.

Credits & Info

Views
2,115
Votes
9
Score
3.54 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 4, 2003
3:25 PM EDT