EEEEEK!
bad music and sticks = no
good muic and drawings = yes
hooray!
Author Comments
This is my first flash ever. Just got the program 2 days before I made this, so ya, it sucks. But it took me about 18 hours to make it, so I decided to share.
((( LACKS COLOR )))
Or maybe thats the way you wanted it but still it would look better with some color, maybe even some detailing of the buildings and no i dont mean lines, good story although it moved abit slow, might want to thinking about animating the sticks limbs more...
~X~
Not bad for your first.
That's really good. I'm somewhat skeptic that this is your first movie, and that it's the culmination of only two days' experience with Flash, but of course, there are flaws... some of the animation was a little weak and the story seemed really cliche. Otherwise, not bad.
Not bad for a first movie.
I find it hard to belive this is your first movie and you made it after having flash fr only 2 days. You must've stayed up for 48 hours striaght learning flash, then doing this. Anyways, The movie was alright. would've been better with a little backround, like maybe a flashback of the girl getting kidnapped or the guy and girl hanging out or something, because we don't know the disk carriers relation to "the girl". The end is kinda sadistic and you definetley shouldn't have had the girl killed because it ruins any chance of a sequal... which would have been very appropriate. And like the last reviewer said, the walking sprite is a little off. But overall, pretty good for a first movie.
You have potential
Lose the sticks and you will be making some pretty good stuff.