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took some time to work on this one, maybe need to change a lot to make it more ... I don´t even know how it should end like. mostly I run out of ideas and other inspiration. so you just get what I can put together. I also appreciate if you give some feedback or at least some kind of resonation. I can´t grow if I don´t get input or critique, so please don´t hold back. at least I hope some of you might enjoy watching it

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Cruelty squad type video

Sn0owball responds:

umm, what do you mean by this?

Once you're able to compartmentalize and source your productivity from a real and dependable place, hardened by discipline, hammered by practice, you'll be much more pleased with yourself after finding a sustainable rate of busywork.

Are you jacking off on the daily? Save it as a reward. Treat yourself as you get that dopamine hit from completing work. Then complete yourself!

What's your diet lookin like? You are what you eat, so if you eat and drink like shit, you're gonna feel like shit.

Watching this animation, you've got loads of potential.

Stop using comic sans font. In fact, it might be a joke that you're using all of these cliche fonts, but I don't get why they're here. It's distracting and it takes me out of...whatever emotional state you're trying to express or invoke with this.

Are these voice actors or AI? If AI, only use them for temp- they can't sufficiently replace the real deal.

What does the pre-production process for this look like? What I'm mainly asking is, does this have a script or is it improvised? Do you storyboard or animatic?

The camera shake at the 32 minute mark sucks- don't do that to your audience. You ultimately want to put asses in the seats, not drive them away by exacerbating their motion sickness or vertigo.

Sn0owball responds:

heya, thank you for your input, opinion and fedback. Now I have something to think of.
well, what do you mean by jacking off? I also get pretty bad at rewarding myself and no matter what I archieve, I don´t feel happy about my outcome.
My diet is pretty normal and healthy and I also do sports, but I don´t understand how this is related to my projects?
sadly none of the "animations" are made by me, I record cut and edit all kind of sources and put them together, but I´m not really sure what I want to archieve or express.
what do you mean by "cliche fonts"? I just ttry different styles and look how it looks in the result, since I´m still learning about things.
I also don´t know how it distracts you?
sadly I also need to disappoint you since there are some projects wthat are nearly finished, where I also used it ^^. but I can stop using it for coming projects.
these voicesarent voice actors or AI. I made them by text to speech and some editing afterwards. I don´t want to use AI for my projects. since I mostly do this to learn about possibilities I guess. Using AI would take a huge part of things that I do away and it´s not what I want to do.
mostly I don´t know what to do or how it should look like, so I don´t really have a pre-production process. mostly I just start doing and see how the project evolves. I also don´t know how to storyboard, since I really lack off ideas.
I looked at the camera shake. it really feels a bit hard, but I can´t promise that it will not happen again, but I can try to not cause too much motion sickness ^^
also I really appreciate your input and will try to think of your ideas for new projects

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Uploaded
Oct 5, 2024
12:01 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental