Hmm...
I couldnt stop laughing at the your clever HILARIOUS antics that you incooperated into your "Movie". The fact of the matter is, your movie is a CLICHE! Literally. Putting NINTENDO characters into it quite possibly makes it MORE of a cliche, for everyone knows nintendo characters can't read!! Well most of them...samus is just psychic. That fact of the matter is that earlier I was being SARCASTIC. Plain and simply your movie is crap. However, because I am "assuming" you are a new to the whole production world, I give you an A for effort. For someone new to flash, it takes a long time to put it all togethor. However again, you probably could have thought up a better idea other than that 5 second story...try again.