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Alley of the Dolls Pt. 5

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This episode marks the last in the "Alley of the Dolls" series for Dr. Shroud. Viewers ultimately decided the outcome of this adventure at DrShroud.com. Dr. Shroud will appear again in "La Maudite: The Damned". Coming soon!!

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Part V The culmination.

The sound has improved (especially the voices) -still needs more creepy piano though. I would have made the scenery a bit more creepy. There was a streetlight in the background that I thought was out of place. Maybe should have occurred in a dark alley or in some abandoned warehouse where the background was vague and left more to the mystery. Midway through it turned from vampire to poltergeist and the exorcist. The doll could have said, "I want to play now" after she multiplied and then "I go by byeeeeeee" after her head rolled on the sidewalk. Also there could have been lightning in the sky. I like when the magician's face was all scratched up and when the dolls just seem to melt away. Great series-it shows you put a lot of thought into planning before you started working with flash. I'll take a look at your site.


robfeldman responds:

Hi-
I read all of your reviews and thank you for the well thought out critique. I appreciate comments like yours, as they contribute to the future of the series. Thanks for taking the time to write all of your reviews. Right now, I am adding more creepy music to the new adventure (I write the main theme, but Science Friction Music does the filler stuff) and am looking forward to making this next one, "La Maudite" filled with lightning and increased overall creepiness. Thanks again.

-Rob


You can VOTE on these things?

I just dropped in on the Dr. Shroud site, and I wish I had found out about Dr. Shroud sooner. When is the next series coming out? I think I'd like to try this voting idea out.

(As for the Attack of the Draculoids, I wonder what would've happened if the voters decided that Dr. Shroud WOULDN'T attack the brain machine. I guess we'll never know....)


robfeldman responds:

Hey there-
I am really glad you liked the site!! The next adventure, "La Maudite", will be out this summer. You will be able to vote with each installment, but only at DrShroud.com. You can see it on Newgrounds, but the voting aspect only takes part on the official site. It's a true vote, as I only work on it once the votes have been cast. Sign up for the mailing list for more updates. As for the big brain, well, we never will know. Heh, heh. ;)


bullshit

i wanted to give this thing a 6.5....but it wouldnt let me....this thing got way too korny...what the hell is with the "abrah cadavre"??..that is the most pathetic saying ever...this thing had so much potential....



VERY STYLISH!!!!

It reminds me of a old Black and white film....but better. Short but good, creepy, and weird.



Good

This is as good as this comic could be everyone and saying that it ended too short is just dumb. If the magician and Shroud got into a bigger fight it would be retarded, Shroud would just kick his ass. I don't like however that you brought up vampire techniques and all this stuff randomly, were you stuck thinking of a way to get Shroud to escape or something. It's cool that he is a vampire and all but I think it is strange. By the way, I think you should make some more, this was a great series, not perfect, but very good.


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Score
3.81 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 14, 2003
12:07 PM EDT
Genre
Action
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