not bad...

...for your first flash, it is good.
You need to improve the sound/voices... This would be the most important item I saw as flawed.
The graphics and animation will come with time and training...
You got the humor, the ideas (i.e. SPC) and just need to work on the sounds...
On other scores, they are not bad:
0 for Interactivity is just because there'e no interaction.
4 on violence is just because there are so much more violence out there that yours fade into less violent type :)
Hope this is helpfull.
Keep them coming.The only way to get better is by making more :)

hmmm

Although i was marginally amused by your all out frontal assault on the last guy to review this, i was not impressed by the actual movie. I think some background music could have helped the sound and maybe a look over the script to make the whole thing a bit more fluid.
I hope I dont get attacked as well...

ok.

For a first flash this is pretty good,my first flash was 10 times as bad.Ok,things to improve:
-Practice and get better,
-Get better after youve practiced,
-When your better become the best.
-Then submit movies that are a lot better then this!

that sucked

why would you make something as crap and dumb as that.

ewww

what the hell is with the fat lesbo chicks...I DONT WANNA SEE THAT WHILE WAITING FOR A MOVIE TO LOAD!!