score: 4
that was pretty good for a second attempt but like many ppl said u should remove the dialogue and put voices in. I like the music, too ;) nice job.
Author Comments
This is my second attempt at a flash, it is a huge step up from my last one. Its short, to the point, and fun to watch. Enjoy!
okay... a little different
It's a little different. Pretty good. Although it is a little short.
Hmmm
I like this music
Hehe...
Im not really going to say this is a great flash movie but it is okay. I can appreciate how hard making these is, especially it being only your second attempt. Although by any standards the graphics are pretty lacking, and the dialogue could have been better.. the premise is great! I thought that part about the moon and the last part were pretty funny!
I also like the Chocobo music from Final Fantasy that you added!
hehehe fat chocobo
well i love final fantasy and i love chocobos i'm dont really love fat...but its a great flash about fat chocobo heehee