Now that its more updated, it has music and voices rather than no sounds at all. New scenes have beeen included so there are also bits that noones seen yet. much better than my first one. another note, my younger cousins did the voices so they arn't that realistic. i you want to talk about it, put a DaRat/LOTR topic on NG BBS,flash
so you can tell me what you think. hope you like
DaRat
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Sort of good but yes I understand that you just began and you are having a hard time.
I meen when I tried flash for the first time I gave up about close to when I started, but then again I couldn't submit the flash I had becuase I didn't have the right flash animater or something....
In other words flash sucks to me anyway. Oh and I just realised, WHY AM I RANTING ABOUT MY LIFE AND NOT ACTUALLY TELLING YOU WHAT I THOUGHT?
Great for a beginner in other words.
Shitassdumbfuck!
What the hell is this? "Be carfull Frodo." "Oh of course Gandalf" Next scene... "i think we should get off the road." This sucks and all of your other creations, DaRat!
Thanks I appreciate your kindness. I must admit I had only just started using flash when I created all of my submissions so yes they are likely to 'suck'
what the fuck ?
It s so boring, you just remake the film in a fucking flash moovie, i wouldnt see the next episode
SUXX
pish-posh
if i wanted to watch lord of the rings, i would have watched lord of the rings, not some cheap animations but it was aight
Better! Alot Better!
Wow! You've done a great job compared to the first version. Music made it alot more pleasing to watch and the elves in the fight scene were improved, motion is allways good. Makes 'em more alive...
I could start nagging about bowshooting and techniques but at this point it's more important to get you to be a better artist.
First thing to start whining: The text was still too FAST. I were barely able to finish one word when it already started fading... No hurry, remember that there's also foreign people in newgrounds and they can't read as fast.
second one: The text didn't show in the brighter scenes. Like in the dwarven ring-scene, letters over the hands were unable to see well as also the typing with the white-grey middle-earth map in the back was difficult to read. Again: too fast!
And finally: I suggest you make your own version. People who actually want to see a straight copy of something alredy seen, are pretty freaking rare! Own vision - more points. Have you red the book?
Thats all this time! And don't get angry if someone tells you to fuck off, usually they are those people who only care for blood and gore. Who needs organs laying around the battlefield (It looks cool, though) if theres nothing else in the whole pack. I prefer story...
"All that is gold, does not glitter", as Tolkien said ;)