Pretty cute. The only line I didn't like was "bizarrely placed cow". It affects the rhyme too. It sounds shoehorned there, much faster than the rest. Maybe "weirdly placed" could work as a shorter synonym?
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Pretty cute. The only line I didn't like was "bizarrely placed cow". It affects the rhyme too. It sounds shoehorned there, much faster than the rest. Maybe "weirdly placed" could work as a shorter synonym?
Thanks for your feedback! Great point you made.
Kids??? KIDS CANT BE ON HERE