I originally wrote this song on my banjo for a filthy little cassette-recorded album I made. After needing to convert the composition to guitar in order to perform live, however, I found that the song had more potential beyond this initial niche throwaway. After recording a more definitive full-band version of the song, I decided to splat together this stupid little music video comprised mainly of a series of incoherent animated ideas that emerged from my fingers in the moment (on the wall, hehe). I wouldn't be surprised if this barf gets blammed for the blatantly unprofessional "attempt" at a music video, but hey. I may as well still try to upload it, right?
Lyrics:
Yesterday is the back of the lord
Dragging on the backs of our luck
The ends of the Earth grin a grin
Salty from the seas and silicon
Metal in the air rubbing the knees
Sucking up isotopes straight from the breeze
Radiation pours into the sand
Decay and ruin on a slice of bread
When the sights seize and the lambs
Curse the lord with a bellowing stench
Trenches will cave with the deepening
Of the immortal wound
It's just a moment on the wall
It's just a moment on the wall
When the sights seize and the lambs
Curse the lord with a bellowing stench
The Earth will cave with the deepening
Of the final breath
It's just a moment on the wall
It's just a moment on the wall
It's just a moment on the wall
It's just a moment on the wall
This is great. There's a lot of really cool animation in here, but I think you know you could clean things up and add some colors and backgrounds to really finish this. Obviously, if you don't think it's worth your effort then that's fine, but your tone in the description felt self-defeating. Either way, I enjoyed it and I hope you continue your efforts.
Oh, I one-hundred percent agree with your criticism. Ideally I'd like to make more animation like some of my former work (primarily "Robo & Roacho"). Hopefully with some time and proper planning, I'll actually be able to get something worthwhile out of the awkward limbo of incompletion, haha.
I digress. I hope you have a lovely evening. Thank you for watching and providing your feedback!
-Connor