This game shouldn't be rated E, but I'm against taking down old games that don't deserve it, so I won't flag it.

It was okay with descriptions, but really read like a 12 year old made it (which is probably the case) but I found it humorous that Cloud kills you whenever you give in.

WTF!? A frickin assassin wouldn't pop out of nowhere and stab besides it was pretty short anway.

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, this was quite descriptive, I guess some people might like how descript this is. I also thought it was funny when Cloud popped out and stabbed you. That made me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
The gramatical errors were very prominent throughout your typing and they were kind of annoying too. There was no music or sound effect either, and the graphical layout was really quite bland.

what the hell.

out of nowhere an assassin stabs your post.
its blammed.

try again?
please god no.

rETARDED

That was the most retarded thing I have ever seen on newgrounds.There is not even a fucking picture in this horrible excuse for a game