Not terrible...
I like the idea of the battery acid soaked lettuce. Guinea pigs are funny, so it gives you a boost in humor from the start to use an actual image of one. But it was much too short for what it was...and the animation needs a hand.
Author Comments
Well, it's about a guinea pig. I hope you like it!
When you don't like it, please review it so I know what I can change!
Updates:
23 March 2003: I fixed the preloader and now you have to click on Sterk to replay, with a animation!
29 April 2003: I finaly added the laser sounds! Yeah, much better.
Please watch the whole movie before voting! And vote fair! Yeah, and watch my other Sterk movies! Thanks!
too short
was kind of funny but it wa too short. maybe you could do another.
Pretty good.
what you should do is:1.make better graphics. 2.When sterk was talking, his mouth was in the wrong place.You should fix that.
Heh heh, I can relate! YAY!
YAY!!!
This rocked. You get a 5, seeing as my last name is Sterkenburg.
STerkenburg
Que?
Okay, things you need to fix:
1)Writing
As for a story, there is none, not to mention the dialogue isn't the best.
2) Animation
C'mon, is that the best you can do? The hamster was jsut a picture of a guinea pig, and the rest of the animation was sub-par. Not to mention the lasers weren't the best either.
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3.31 / 5.00
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