I think they should...
The graphics needed alot more effort put into them. Seriously. I'm guessing this was made in about ten minutes. I could of done this in three or four.
The voice acting wasn't clear, either. It was clear enough for you to hear what the characters were saying but there was still a bit of feedback/static or whatever. Try having your mouth not so close to the microphone try not to shout as much.
The idea was interesting but the flash was rather poor due to bad graphics and bad voice acting but you tried and I'm sure you'll become alot better at flash within the future. Keep practicing and good luck to your future projects. I'll give you 3/10.