It could have been worse...I'm sure of it...

Alright, let's start at the beginning. There is absolutely no story. There is no humor. That can be made up for by the good animation. Except there isn't any. Or the great sound! Except..There...isn't any. How about voice acting that doesn't sound like it was recorded using a T.V. Dinner? None of that either. The most constructive thing I can say is this: for the sake of everyone who has ever watched a flash movie, please don't make another.

ouch

thanks to this i am slowly painfuly going blind but pls STOP MAKING FLASH ANIMATIONS it will do us all a favor

LOL

Funny, but not because its meant to be funny.
PS use the line tool instead of the paintbrush

Huh?

That, with no doubt, is the most messed up flash I ever watched! Work at the animation, and some of the voices were off sync. It's not the best...but definally....definally not the worst. It had some moments to it, and I didn't hate it. I look forward to se how you improve. Good work...I enjoyed the weird humour.

ok

uummm good i guess , need to work on your animations though