very ordinary

it was an average storyline and the gun shots were too loud for the rest of the audio.

ugh

your audio sucked, so if i turned it down so the gunshots werent blasting my ears out, i couldnt hear the fool talk. also, u might wanna make them less stiff, cuz they didnt move at all, which also sucked.

okay

it looks like it might be good if you fix it up a bit

((( LOOKS OK )))

Well it does need some sharpening up on the art but looks ok, more shadowing and detaill and you have somthing decent, keep up the good work...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: A good concept...

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Hate to be a hard ass but...

THAT SUCKED