I say nothing.
Its terrible ok.

lol, the voice acting made me laugh. It's obvious you had fun making this, that's all that matters. Make an effort to improve!

Regardless of what you say...

WOW THAT SUCKED...

not that bad

try speaking softer back away from mic or polish up sound in a program or (last or)
lower your mic and trace more sprites otherwise good i like the storyline and effects

I agree...

to what everyone else says. The voice was not good and the sprite animation average.

Plz continue practise