potential

ok, so there was a dire lack of plot, but that can be overlooked. it has potential to be very funny i think it just needed bulked up a bit. the audio was good the music and the sound effects worked well. your graphics could have been improved, it wasnt the drawings, it was the tweening.
Even if the first seen had been Frame-By-Framed for the penguin walking, this submission could have been greatly improved.

Well, needs improving

Graphics need improving, the minimal plot was ok, but really a story that short shouldn't take more then one episode. Try and but some voice acting in next time, subtitles are old.

((( HMMMMM )))

Hmmmmm ok well notbad, abit short kinda cinfusing, but the bush thing was kinda funny, keep it up...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: A short crazy of a film...

~X~

yeah

I am not really understanding the jist of this, did 1, 2, and 3 get deleted?

Ryan

what did i just watch???????????

very very very very confusing.