Cr0mzX Seems to need more
I guess reason must take a day off sometimes...
I suggest you go over everything again, and invest more of your heart into your work.
Graphics: Needs fine tuning.
Music: Alright, but not synked with actions on screen.
Preloader: Fairly odd looking. At least it works.
Content: Bland Penis jokes...
All in all, I think you can do better given more practice.