well i didnt really watch this but i thought i was prettey bad!
i don't know
i really thought it was great
it was great but you really need to unlock more and more pictures because it's good but not as good as it could be. Remember add more pics........PLZ
WHY...OH WHY DID YOU TAKE THAT TIME OUT OF MY LIFE.....
It's not a bad start on this video, it does seem like more of a music video thing though. Maybe if you wanted to keep the plot you could have more images to show the audience whats going on.
All in all it seems like you rushed it. The timing was good, but it seems like you rushed everything else.