It's great that you apologize for it. There wasn't any sound here. Was it supposed to be like that? I guess you just regard this as old shame. The sprite work is pretty good. It just didn't come off as funny.
It was probably too short. There wasn't much going on. He didn't seem very angsty to me. Could he commit suicide as a ghost? Maybe then, he'd come back alive? Whatever, it's just bland.