Needs more color, more audio, and a better UI
Edit: I didn't realize this was for a game jam. Really impressive job for being on a time crunch. I do wish there was more to this game, I hope to see updates or sequels that can expand on this concept.
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(Well, i just wanted to know a reaction to this kind of work. )
VN plot: Girl awake in morning and realize that "something is not right" and went onto journey to figure it out.
Graphic: Originally I tried to get an artist to draw the picture (because it was a game Jam) but I stayed alone and my concept pencil draw stays as theme.
Sfx, UI, icons and other sprites: Free sources
Some sprites from Wikipedia and such
Program: Build in Unity3D
dretnoth responds:
Oh hi thanks for the reply (somehow i dint notice it, UPS )
Originally the VN was for a Game Jam and i aimed to get the artist from the pool of volunteers who wanted to join the Jam. But i dint snatch anyone. So, i made the concept art (drawing) get some audio from net. But still ended up alone.
I actually thought i shall color the pictures... but then i said to me: "Its concept art. It's actually good enough, for a first show done." But i dint make any useful progress in others.
But once again. Thanks for your commentary and sorry that the reply it's so late, i just log in.