girls

It's a good start. Work on some walk cycles and details in your backgrounds. Keep practicing and you will get better. Good job.

great

This is a great first flash. I was very impressed by the time and effort you put into this flash. Please email me so I can help you with your latest work. flashbluesky2002@yahoo.com
Our work will not be the same without you. Your friend, flashsky. (:

Not the greatest but good

Hey not bad for your first flash. it kinda sucked but hey! you should see mine im gunna import l8r 2day.

that was cute

it was pretty good for your first one. :)

huh?

that ending was...uh...yeah. you couldn't take the time to make the girls look different? and those voices... O_o