man it was fucked up

im gettin pissed make o good damn movie its not hard if you want to be funny get hammerd and walk into the street but this is absolutly fucked up to the max.

Writing without any audio or visual support

What I mean is that if you improved the graphics (as frame rate and artwork) and the audio (as in voice acting and possible music), then this would turn out a lot better. Also, you need it longer. This was more of a sloppy intro to a full story than anything else.

((( HMMMMM OK )))

Ok well im sure its a good start, some advice if you will take it, first off make a play button so we dont have to wonder when its done, its just easier for the viewer to better get to the movie, maybe clean up the artwork abit, audio seemed abit staticky, maybe clean it up abit, and more story, jokes are ok but move on and show more animation aswell as the jokes, well hope that helped...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Two guys, joking around...

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i thought i wrote a review for this already...

oops

wow looks like sumin my dog makes...

this is the crappiest thing ive seen in awhile.now those last ppl loved it...must have done it out of pity or they were drunk,high,or retarded.Please dont submit shit like this again.