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My first proper jump into this animatic thing, I wanna try my hand on full on animation sooner or later but for now I'm kind of doing this to dip my toe into the water

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this is pretty solid! though the guy on the right in the first shot's mouth seems a bit off
i have a solid grasp of what's going on with the shots you boarded, though it feels a little static. i feel like with the boards, they act better as thumbnails to get a gist of what happens in this story beat. for the 3rd shot, you could have the character on the right have the same pose from the 1st and when he says "oh brother," he switches to that pose with the hand on his nose bridge.
like i said, it's pretty good for a first proper jump!! i'd try looking up some other animatics from animated shows you enjoy and see how those are structured :]

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Sep 29, 2022
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