there's something about these characters contriving characters that fail to be realised or developed further, while they themselves are contrived through pen, paper and voicelines in what appears to be a rough draft that never quite makes it into something "more". also something about the fanciful, expressive, perhaps disney-esque fluid animation bringing a certain expectation to the viewer, and what seems safe to assume the same expectation (or that they know better not to have) to these two characters that fails to be met.

and needless to say, by rough draft, i only mean the style you've chosen with intention. the animation is sublime. i've seen your other works and really appreciate the delicate humour also.

thanks for making this.

Nice animation

I love the idea that this was animated on paper like this or to look like it you have raised the bar on this entry But anyways once again its a pleasure to review this project You have some good content and material here on this submission, There is a story here with the characters and the train was very good, It all worth the while so on that note this was a pleasure and hope to see more like it soon or in the near future, I think all this really needs is some subtitles but overall was pretty good

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excelent!! a piece of cinema! it is animated on tvpaint? love the brush work, the voice acting, the timing, everything. I would love to se a movie or a serie like this. something fresh and original

Beautiful work, clearly so much thought and love has gone into every frame of this.

Cool!