Don't expect anything fancy???

Ok, as your first submission, I guess its fair not to expect anything fancy, but you could at least have had the decency of posting something worthy of the time it takes to open and watch.

YOU HAVE FAILED SIR.

No, just no.

Bad... DAMNIT... BAD!!

The ONLY reason i didnt BLAM the hell out of this is because althought it sucked, you DID put SOME effort into it.

Just keep practicing... and for the love of god, dont do that again.

......the fuck.......

........wot.....the...hell.... .that was so very very gay, that you need shooting u sad TWAT.

Poorly done.

The music is too distorted. Try kicking it down a few notches pal. The speech balloons come and go too fast for me to read them. The movie was done before I could get an idea of what it was about. Didn't bother watching it twice.

Needs help

The sound.. it's like a busted speaker. And the graphics are kinda, blah. The lil' words go by so fast you can bairly read it, to small. =\