It's been awhile since i hit up my favorite series on NG. I love your stuffs Aphro. Okok...so Yunoire is just a walking/swimming liability sticker. Hopefully Jack can get Alex out of 'Fate.' But, knowing Apollo at this point, this is probably going to be used to get Jack arrested, Yunoire captured (again) and gain more control over the ship.

i really like when i see a user and their creation grow and this is one of those series. the music feels appropriate here and suits your style. the interactions between characters feels natural and fit the characters nicely. there was stakes put here and perspective on alex and the captain were definitely put into here and changed as a result. the cliffhanger was an interesting move but one that got me excited and scared to see what happens next what hasnt been told yet in this world they live in. i also enjoy the ending credits here. its really nice.

The opening dialogue and animation with the two was done really good and is a at this point on par with most of the better solo and indie animators I see getting started around here. Animation is always comparing oranges to apples however. The lip synch is good to the point of not really noticing anything wrong. Everything was really good up tell she took the sword, for some reason the blocking and shots felt kinda of weightless in her movements to free her tied up friend. It also messed with the tension of the scene. Which overall was really good. The sword cutting the rope also was lacking a bit of reaction. Honestly the animation is at this point is fine, like I'm sure you'll get better with time and it will improve as you do more or could even possibly find people to help with in-between and blocking. The voice acting and audio quality for recording was pretty good and is a pretty solid 5/5 not hearing anything off at this point. Audio mixing was ok, the music in the, I don't know sword stealing section was close to good but was maybe a bit soft. The laser abduction noise and the falling in water noise were both somewhat louder then they probably should have been. The noise of her falling in water also felt off or like didn't feel like it fit, if this was a surreal choice I get it, but it felt more like a lack of an audio library. Like something either more realistic or even more fantastical if not some musical notes. I think at this point every episode is pretty much better then the last in terms of quality and look forward to this when episodes do come out. I'm giving it a 5/5 since I don't want to see this get blammed or anything, I'd give it like a solid 4/5 to 4.5/5. I hope the feedback helps a bit, I really like the style and direction of the art here. I hope it gets more views and comments as well.