at least you tryed
how has this not got blamed? i have seen better things get blammed in no time . o well life be life
Author Comments
Hi guys! Here is the first part of my cartoon. As you can probably see, I am new to Flash and find it quite hard. I know that its not finished, and I know that it can be fustrating when you don't see the end, but I wanted to see whether there was any point in continuing.
* PLEASE NOTE This cartoon does not have a preloader or any start button so it goes straight away, sorry guys *
Also, please don't be mean, this is my first movie!
Blech.
Hmm.... I don't know what to say. No preloader, and it just loops at the end. This good have been good, but as it is, its just mediocre.
((( NICE WORK )))
Nice first work, its a great demo, even though denos are abit tacky, i would love to see this thru, the talking was kinda realistic, aswell as the flying over, anyways great work...
~X~
Brilliant
This is great, you realy should finish it though. AsI said it's brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not Bad
Make the shadow smaller, or remove it completely. An aircraft flying above doesn't cast shadows. Other than that, looks good.
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2.19 / 5.00
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- Feb 21, 2003
- 1:43 PM EST