I'm working on the real movie and I just wanted to release a little bit to gauge the reaction. I realize there's no plot here, in the larger version it's about a corrupt cop who's trying to bring down drug dealers, it's just a sample of one of the latter scenes, please review it so I can improve the full length version. J.P. Williamson Sucks.
Sorry, I just noticed I forgot the preloader, please don't let that effect your review, I'll add that when the other one comes out.
Not the best idea on doing something...
drug-dealers, cops it's all been done before. "There's a new hard ass in town" or something over-used. Personally I'd just drop it wherever you are on it, and think of something new that'll dazzle people. Doesn't even have to have the best graphics Plus it's the cops who should be the ones looked down upon...
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it's...........kind of bad and short
huh?
this dosnt really make any sense whatsoever it just shows a stick person shottin a stick figure. honestley, u couldda done a lot better on this and made it a little longer, even if it is just a preview
Not superb
Well, here's for an honest response:
1/ If you're starting in animtion, then yah, sticks are the way to go, but only if you're starting
2/ I am not much of an animator but for sweat, you should probably update forms and look into alpha channels if that's the term used in this case (transparency...)
3/ If ou do pursue in sticks, either increase the frame rate and put a bit more into it, or do something witty with them (simplest is form modification /= transfomation)
4/ hope to see more soon
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thats excessive violence? hmm.. ok then whatever pops your clogs i guess..