Well while others may just put it down, it still took some effeot to put it together, the audio should be worked on the most, maybe add more detail, but overall it could be better, hope to see more soon...

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Wow, great SFX. I love how the drill sergeant whispered when he "yelled." Good stuff. Honestly though, enough. :|

It wasn't that funny, the sound quality was very low quality and the voices sounded like they were done by a 12-year old(I assume it was you). Get someone else to do big gruff voices in future, and don't be afraid to shout fromt ime to time. And make the entry worth watching with something that is actually funny.

that voice acting was dreadful

I like the effort you put into this. I can the added details you added in to give the military training a deadly look. The few suggestions I have to give you are pretty basic things. Graphically it's hard to see your black stick-figures on a 'very' dark green background. For this I suggest you look at what other flash artists have done to make black show up during night time scenes. Secondly, you need music. There is no such thing as absolute silence...unless you're in a vacuum *outer-space not the appliance*