Good Concept, Bad Loading Screen
The story also seems absent until the robot appears. You could have done better. The animation and sound are good quality though.
Author Comments
This is my third film now. Took bout 3 weeks to put together. There will be a sequal out in about a week maybe less. But after that ill NEVER do another comic again due to the amount of time and complication it took putting it together, and also i just dont like the detached feeling it gives. if i do continue the series itll be in movie format. Sorry but its just too much of a pain in the ass. Anyways i wasnt happy with the detached feeling i got from watching the finished result in comic format(i think i just said that lol). Just when you get into the story it ends and you gotta go to the next frame =/
this is a completely original idea spawned by me, and id love to see some good spinoffs.(ive checked all of newgrounds for anything like it) there have been other comics but not like this. Also im looking for someone whod like to partner up with me and help dub my future films. if anyones interested in doing voice dubbing(not music, i like doing the music =) contact me.
thanx for taking the time to view this project i hope you enjoy -rob brandon
p.s. i got a lil happy with the word fuck in this one =P
This review is about ninjas, REAL NINJAS.
This review is awesome.
You were right about the detached feeling, but the format has a lot going for it. The ninja falling down the page on the rope and jumping back into the panel were extremely cool if subtle touches. Perhaps you could combine every sequence on each page into a continuous movie rather than just scrapping the device altogether.
cool movie
i hated the comic book thing but then, im just lazy
haha, you fucking loser
You have the balls to come insult MY drawing skills and compare them to a five year old's when you put out shit like this? I've seen special ed kids VOMIT better art then you do.
xKillerTofux responds:
if my drawings look like retard vomit then god i hate to think what that makes your pothetic drawings =)
Great concept.
I like the idea, but you might want to get someone else to draw it.