Music by cYmix - House with Legs
Second animated video to promote my kickstarter campaign in order to get my second graphic novel printed.
The the story is about a young soldier who is stranded on alien planet and must get out however along with the many creatures that want to devour him but also humans as well. Originally to be a short web comic posted on comicsfury the story becam longer and epic in scope.
If you are interested here’s the link http://kck.st/3KPk6rC
If you have problems recording the audio i recommend you not to get too close to him because you can spit on him (That sounds more when you pronounce the P) if you have problems in the same way because of things like the wind i recommend you use a thick blanket and be under it, if you continue as you are right now you can improve, you are on the right track!
The biggest problem here is that the voice acting needs a lot more work. It was too quiet and the music pretty much washed it down. I recommend Audacity so that you can amplify the lines more. It's free so it should be no problem to get. Aside from that, you got some pretty good animation going on here, and for FlipaClip it's really impressive. Hope to see more in the future. :)
Thanks for the critique sadly this was my last ditch effort to release something which could promote my kickstarter campaign which is basically dead in the water by now.