Condense the Preview
I believe it can be shortened. So far it looks as if you've taken a simple situation and tried to stretch it out. Also the flashing of the text was too far apart for anybody to comprehend.
Though previews can be long, the message you have displayed is stretched out a lil bit far. If you can fix this, then your preview will be more effective.
Stick to making loaders
The reason I rated high humor is because of the laughability! Ha! The picture quality is good, but the animation quality is horrible. I respect you as a person who's trying, but you don't have the creativity. How does it take 50 seconds after the gunshot to have blood start to seep? The animation techniques here are totally a retch. You are good at loaders, though. Stick to that.
The loader was clever
The 3d art is mediocre (not that I can do better. I am impressed). The animation was aweful. I mean seriously, not to totally smash on you, your other animation was better. But wtf! You just used tweens pretty much the whole time. That and it was pictures, that you just used flash to animate. I mean you could have put some effort into it. I mean, at least to the whole animation in 3d animation, not that... well whatever that was. Call it what you will. You have potetial to do way better man. Keep working.
well, yet again, I have to say your loading sequence is the best part. I dunno about that 3D animation though.
Ok, but not good
It just seemed like moving pictures, either get better at 3D animation, or use the style use use for fairy sorrow. I like the story though, but why do you like fantasy so much?