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Teen chptr .1

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chapter one next chapter will be on drugs............


p.s:feel free to leave stories of this topic in the rewiew boxes

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Okay, but not great

Graphics - I believe the graphics were superior some of the stuff I've seen here, it could be a little better, but it's cool the way it is too.

Style- Your style was okay... but you have to add more to it.

Sound- There wasn't really any sound... and that doesn't help it much...

Violence- Violence was only hinted at, but turned away from in the end. This can be a good thing.

Interactivity- There wasn't much interactivity with this one.

Humor- This isn't a very humorous topic, so it shouldn't be viewed as such.

Overall- I believe that this has the potential to become something really good, but it needs some work.

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I dont know if the author of this clip was trying to be serious or not, but i think this was crappy in almost every way. if the author had more knowledge of computer animating, he probobly could have made a better film.... i am on the border-line of BLAMMING this.

((( HMMMMMMM )))

Hmmm ok well abit different, well there should some sound or music, and then maybe add a play/w/stopaction button, and also a replay button, that looping is well just anoying, voices are needed though...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: A film with b/w style frame by frame style, different and unique...

~X~

Movie=suck

Crap movie, but i couldnt help overhear this last guy

Dont kill urself l337. Im not pleading u not too its just all the pussies like u piss me off. I dont exactly have a great life either, but im not gonna blow my brains out. If im gonna die something else is gonna kill me not me giving up like a little fucking twat. Get some guts. Step up.

You ever dealt w/ depressed suicidal people before

Doesn't seem like you did. I'm a 16 yo guy who's clinically dperessed and thinkim bout suicide (don't plead me not to, it won't make a difference to me) and if you're that far gone to pull a gun on yourelf, you don't give a damn bout all the nice things in the world because you can't see them through the depression that's clouding your eyes and judgement. I mean I have a gf and I love her a lot, but even her love couldn't save me if I decided to pull a gun on myself. Not by just thinkin bout her.

I kinda like your style, creating the art like that (don't know how to quite describe it man),but in the end when the gun falls you just seemed to slack off and just put the legs in normally. that cost you some style points. oh yeah.. and improve your facial features, the eyes weren't really good. were you trying to emulate an anime style? if yeah then you need to work on it.

Other than that, a half-decent effort.. this your first flash?

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Feb 14, 2003
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