Okay, but not great
Graphics - I believe the graphics were superior some of the stuff I've seen here, it could be a little better, but it's cool the way it is too.
Style- Your style was okay... but you have to add more to it.
Sound- There wasn't really any sound... and that doesn't help it much...
Violence- Violence was only hinted at, but turned away from in the end. This can be a good thing.
Interactivity- There wasn't much interactivity with this one.
Humor- This isn't a very humorous topic, so it shouldn't be viewed as such.
Overall- I believe that this has the potential to become something really good, but it needs some work.