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^^Good Points^^
I thought that some of the drawings you made were pretty decent. I liked the buildings and trees you drew in the background. That part was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Everything else in this movie is far below par. For one thing. You gave the user a good thirty seconds to read a question mark in the beginning. I was about to exit the movie because I thought it was over. The storyline is a little lame and not very creative. This was also really short, though I'm not sure I would watch an extended version.

That was cool.

Not bad for a first movie. But it should be way longer with more tricks and stuff, and the music stopped on the second scene. But very nice, remember: longer and stronger!...hmm, i dont quite know waht that means....

not bad

it has amazing graphics considering it is your first, but put more of a story line into it