Great for a first timer.
It's not that good, but if you keep working, you can be pretty good.
Reading thorugh some of the comments I see now that '1' was too nice, here let me explain. First of all the graphics where some of the shittiest graphics I have ever seen on newgrounds. Second, please, please, for the love of god, don't make anymore submissions for a long, long, long, long time. Practice stickfigures and submit them to SFDT then come here when you know what'cha doin'. Third, a game, FUCK NO. Fourth, a game.... FUCK NO. Fith, whoever comments "nice artwork" for this thing is a very stupid 13 year old boy. Don't you have some homework to do?
A bit.... uhh.. retarded?
dude, nice work, good trailer or whatever...music i love, but yea, you need work on the graphics....im an amateur flash animater....dude, id love to work on your project, like making flash movies for it....if you would have me tha tis
Something's really cool about this, but...
...you need someone to do the graphics for you. The ideas seem alright to me, but the graphical design is really what weakens it.
Also, I'd consider toning down the high notes in the musical score, it sounded pretty annoying (although/because I have crappy speakers and the bass doesn't get across properly here).
Otherwise, I think it's OK!