it was allright
it was ok better than anything I could do cause I dont animate but not bad could use some work though
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I haven't logged into newgrounds in years. Looking at this, what a piece of shit. I never even made it into anything!
Haha.
halycon responds:
Yeah, its the first movie I made when I got flash... I have gotten better, maybe not at drawing with a mouse in flash, but I have gotten very good at using the program... At least I didnt go 'This is my first movie, please dont blam it' LOL!! Thanks for reviewing, even though this was made quite a while ago :)
Okay
You need to work on your skills. Get better at actually making stuff in flash and then your story might not be so bad.
halycon responds:
Yeah I know, sorry, it was the first thing I made when I just got flash...
You might notice by some of my newer things that I did get better at it though :)
Since all comments are welcome...
I just wanted to maybe point out that if you aren't a great animator maybe you should explore other ways in flash to tell the story. I really like the stuff you've done so far and it's obvious you know your way in and out of flash but maybe you could have someone else help with or actually do all of the animation. Who knows, you might get in contact with someone who is a great animator that can't use flash :) I'm sure they exist :)
Keep it up
halycon responds:
Thanks, ive seen you review some of my other stuff, so thanks for those reviews too :)
Not bad
Pretty good, though she needs a little work, doesn't look right, hips should be higher and breats more inwards, and face should longer and not as wide. but thats just my opinion, you can take it seriously or not ;)
halycon responds:
All comments welcomed, and thanks, yeah ive just started in flash and im not a real exceptional animator. Well I tried to draw a girl lol. Ill work on it.
OMG
that was the biggest damn CastleVania:legacy of darkness ripoff ive evr seen. get some new material dude. otherwise, it was pretty damn good
halycon responds:
Ooh, sorry to say I have never seen Castlevania. Hmm yea, if that is the same maybe I should get some new material. Thanks, im still lookin for someone to write.