Have you concidered finishing it?

I tottaly agree with the last guy... this was really starting to get good! It's like you were just getting into it but got bored and finished it off as quick as you could... maybe you should think about re-doing the ending and replacing this entry?... nice work!

could use a better ending

i thought that this was turning into a really good flash then it ended. could use a better ending

It just kinda ends...

right when it starts going somewhere it just ends. Wheres the fun in that.

No, not really

That sound file seemed like it could have been continued into an interesting song, but otherwise, I don't really like it.

ok...

that was really wierd