This is terrible
I can't imagine something worse, this should have gotten turd of the week
Author Comments
this along with the intro are my first flash animations
Im hoping for a good response---the better the response, the more/better i do
please give me as many tips as u can as i am new to flash and had a difficult time putting this together....for instance i wanted this and the intro to be one movie but i created them seperatly and couldnt fit em together in the end.....
everything in this was created by me and no one else
Have fun and enjoy
Way too short
I thought it was a very short movie to start the series off. Plus like Nuttybanana said, filesize is too large for it. Compression is needed.
Looks promising....
And am i right in thinking most of those images weren't drew in flash?
The filesize is reeeeeaaaaaaaaally big for such a short animation, only reason i picked that out is cos i'm on 56k. Try using symbols, i'm guessing this is all frame by frame but the backgrounds a detailed pretty well, you should learn about symbols. It's all in the tutorials with flash, go through them and you'll be producing animations of more quality.
The art, animation and sound was all good though, do continue
tysparky responds:
thx for the tip
..i hadnt even looked into symbols but i will for my next one
and ya i designed my characters in paint and they will eventually all be in flash once i get better in it
Short....
But has potential. Anything original is good.
NICE!! BUT INCOMPLETE!!
-=WARNING! WARNING! CAN'T SEE PRELOADER. NOT THAT IT MATTERS, I HAVE DSL.=-
You should fix the BG color to something the 56kers can read from.
Repeating my Q from my intro review, couldn't you have just smacked the two movies together?
Anyway, I can see you put much into this, but it's a bit terse. There's a beginning, what seems to be a middle, but no end. I can't follow. :( Would've been a decent trailer.