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Well, this has improved from the last two. Which isn't saying a lot. But I am learning what I'm capable of doing more now.

I want to drink chocolate milk in the shower without it watering down...that would be fun.

Back on track. Feedback is always nice. Comment and say what is good, and bad. Comments that are along the lines of "this is stupid" without any ACTUAL reasons are not welcome.

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good effort!

this had a lot of potential and it was good, just one major thing really, i found it really hard to work out what some of the people were saying so maybe you want to make the sound quality a bit higher, other than that not a bad at all! oh yeah, also maybe try and shorten the pauses between some scenes or sommin because for some reason it camr accross as a bit disjointed and im not sure why so try and cut out some of the longer pauses by putting in some background music or just shorten them. i think music would make it quite a bit better to help the flow.

((( VERY WELL DONE )))

I really like the black/white style at the start, with some color, text ran abit too fast but still nice, great work and great animation, could use more sounds and voices for a better outcome, notbad though...

~X~

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"Yeah we're making love. What's up?" I think. That was my favorite quote. Good graphics, you did expand on plot, which is a big thing. The only problems I have were the Alien's and the Robot's voices, they had an annoying background to it. Everything else was fine.

Ryan

great work

this was kewl. i liked it. keep them comming. great work.

Liked it

I did like this - good animation, and mildly amusing too. The only thing that let this down was the voices - I found it very difficult to hear what was being said. Even so, this is very promising. Keep up the good work!

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Score
3.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 5, 2003
2:28 AM EST