good effort!

this had a lot of potential and it was good, just one major thing really, i found it really hard to work out what some of the people were saying so maybe you want to make the sound quality a bit higher, other than that not a bad at all! oh yeah, also maybe try and shorten the pauses between some scenes or sommin because for some reason it camr accross as a bit disjointed and im not sure why so try and cut out some of the longer pauses by putting in some background music or just shorten them. i think music would make it quite a bit better to help the flow.

((( VERY WELL DONE )))

I really like the black/white style at the start, with some color, text ran abit too fast but still nice, great work and great animation, could use more sounds and voices for a better outcome, notbad though...

~X~

8

"Yeah we're making love. What's up?" I think. That was my favorite quote. Good graphics, you did expand on plot, which is a big thing. The only problems I have were the Alien's and the Robot's voices, they had an annoying background to it. Everything else was fine.

Ryan

great work

this was kewl. i liked it. keep them comming. great work.

Liked it

I did like this - good animation, and mildly amusing too. The only thing that let this down was the voices - I found it very difficult to hear what was being said. Even so, this is very promising. Keep up the good work!