((( COOL )))
Ok well i did like this one, somewhat, the art was decent, the animatin was also decent, it was abit dark, the story was also great, maybe add some more music and some more sounds, other then that i liked it...
~X~
Author Comments
Hey this is the first part of an upcoming series, feedback is good, i want to work on what i get from the reviews.
This is mainly just about a guy who is now become a cop and is coping with his new life n everything.
watch and enjoy (hopefully :))
realy good stryline!!!
i look 4ward to the sequel alot
Not very good
The graphics were lacking, the flash was short, there were horrible grammatical errors... all in all just not good. I'm not interested in seeing a second episode at all.
chis responds:
thanks for your review, but ill make it so you will want to be interested in seing my next one :D
over all it was ok
I would be more fun if the traning was a mini game. it had an ok story to it
1. make the next one longer even if it does take longer to make.
chis responds:
Thanks, it will take longer to make, but ill try and make it worth it.
A few leetle tweaks.
I think you need to watch this movie through yourself, there are a few little niggles to sort out, such as the words extending past the edge of the speech bubbles, other than that i expect that the storyline will be expanded further in the next part.
chis responds:
Thanks for the review, im not good with story lines n stuff, but ill try hard... this is my first real flash movie... and ive had flash 3 years :D
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