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Lira And The Future Part1

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Hey this is the first part of an upcoming series, feedback is good, i want to work on what i get from the reviews.
This is mainly just about a guy who is now become a cop and is coping with his new life n everything.
watch and enjoy (hopefully :))

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((( COOL )))

Ok well i did like this one, somewhat, the art was decent, the animatin was also decent, it was abit dark, the story was also great, maybe add some more music and some more sounds, other then that i liked it...


realy good stryline!!!

i look 4ward to the sequel alot

Not very good

The graphics were lacking, the flash was short, there were horrible grammatical errors... all in all just not good. I'm not interested in seeing a second episode at all.

chis responds:

thanks for your review, but ill make it so you will want to be interested in seing my next one :D

I'm not really thrilled by the movie....

In general i thought this was middle of the road in quality. I don't know anything about flash personally, but is it possible to make one designated button to move the text along rather than making the viewer shift his/her hand every few seconds? Otherwise, there seems to be a tiwnkling of potential(whatever that means).

chis responds:

good point, i should of just shoved a button at the bottom right or something, thanks ill keep that in mind.

over all it was ok

I would be more fun if the traning was a mini game. it had an ok story to it

1. make the next one longer even if it does take longer to make.

chis responds:

Thanks, it will take longer to make, but ill try and make it worth it.

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2.44 / 5.00

Feb 4, 2003
6:34 AM EST