This was wrong...

The concept was wrong, the story was wrong, the fact that your mother allowed herself to get you pregnant was wrong. EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FLASH WAS WRONG!!!!!

Good plot but....

That movie sucked so bad that a vaccum wouldn't be any sucking competition at all.

((( HMMMMM )))

Hmmmm what was the bug, i didnt notice much from the other one, well like i said before notbad, keep working on it...

~X~

*Sigh*

Please man the storyline was somewhat respectable i think but come on you used tons of different pics for the characters and no voices what so ever i think this should we should blam this, sorry

When you try to tell a story....

1. Use ONE picture for the main characters
2. Don't use anime
3. Develop story/plot
4. Add sounds/voicies
And 5. MAKE IT INTERESTING!