Voice acting, dialogue, & art style are decent, but the animation looks rough.

I think adding some exaggerated smear frames (like these for example: https://idearocketanimation.com/8857-animation-techniques-smear/) to give the illusion of fluid movement & maybe adding a few or so more frames in between would probably help.

For shading & lighting, try using hue-shading & use different colors instead of just black & white for lighting effects whenever it's necessary. (It don't have to be 100% realistic.)

Maybe it's the fact that I'm always a sucker for anthro animal action (take it from the Sonic Fan writing this) but i just loved how this turned out. Though the Animation could use some work.

While I will admit the animation is a bit on the choppy side, the voice acting and art (which are AMAZING by the way) makes up for that.

Space animal action is always fun!