An animatic of my own personal project

I'm redoing this for one of my college classes and putting the old ver here for feedback

I don't want to talk much about the plot as I'm still developing certain important characters and I haven't come up with a good summary for it.

If you want more of these characters I am making a comic to continue the story the first page of the comic is already on my Kofi for people to read: ko-fi.com/atara_parakitty

The rest of the comic is on my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/AtaraZG