A fun little game, it's interestingly written and well made, the dialogue is fun and interesting, and overall a good little demo, these types of games aren't really my thing but I thought it'd be pretty fun to check out.
As someone has probably already mentioned before, the game could benefit from some sound effects to brighten the game up a bit from feeling too empty, sound-wise.
would recommend it if you enjoy these types of text-based story games along the lines of something like a "Choose your own Adventure" book or a DnD exploration-type game.
8/10 :]