hmmm?

Where is the plot in this piece of work? there seems to be no reason for the waiter/owner to start beating up the guy at the table.

The sound quality, although being far from clear was decidedly better than the animation quality, the black screen 'This fight scene is too violent to be shown' just seems to me to be done as a cop out for avoiding having to actually show a fight scene, which is a shame because it could have been the saving grace of this piece of flash.

Keep trying, and remember if you didnt want peoples opinions of your work then you wouldnt post stuff on Newgrounds.

Regards.

LB

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Okay, aside from the lame plot...how in the hell did the picture get back on the wall after "1 minute later?"

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BE RATIONAL NEXT TIME!!!

Violence....

He he he!
Nice music, nice story, and ok animation.
Poor guy, got beaten up, even though he did not do anything at all!!

((( GREAT ACTION )))

Heheh that was funny, even the black screen part, heheh it has great music and good animation, i like the story, lots of action aswell, great job, hope to see more soon...

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